Thursday, 1 December 2011

Narrative script for our thriller opening.

Jack hangs up the phone leaving the beeps..

Detective scene
D1: Who was she?
D2: Don't you remember?

Pause and hands D1 the file containing imformation about the girl



D2: Laura Robinson, three suicide attempts last month
D1 : I doubt that was the case here though

D2: What are we working with?
There is a pause before D2 passes file back to D1
D1: Holds up bag with the girls phone in



D1: The murder took place around 4, due to a message she received on her phone
D2: Which would explain why she was out here alone
D1 and D2 look at each other



D1: Do you think it was him?
D1 hands file to D2
D2: It looks like his work

D2 hand file back to D1

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