Pestilence (Jack's idea 3)
When we looked at what Jack had for an idea we thought it was good because it had things which sounded different to what we had originally thought of. What i thought made this idea good was how he spoke of a flash back/forward, this is when we swap scenes from two detectives talking about the murderer and how he kills his victims. Then the scene would quickly change and produce someone being murdered. This is quite a good idea because it doesn't give to much away but it does give enough to make the audience want to know what happens next.
The word Pestilence means: If someone is pestilent they can be anything from annoying to deadly. Can be morally, physically, socially or politically harmful or pernicious. It can refer to anything that is particularly disruptive to society.
Narrative:
Jack thought about having the idea of someone talking about a villains previous crimes whilst the murderer is walking and committing another crime. This would result in this being a voice over.
Jack also had some ideas for little quotes, such as:
- ‘He’s dangerous’
-- ‘We need to catch him before he kills again’
- ‘He’s a danger to society’
- ‘Most wanted in England’
So basically Jack's idea is to have two little story's playing over the top of each other doen't work out then we could use the affect from 'Day to Night' this would help us create the opening we wish.
Credits:
Jack had a clever idea of using the files the detectives would be holding as a way of opening the credits. So as they are slamming down the files onto the desk you would see a photo of us and our name and maybe even who we are playing in the opening.
Another idea Jack had for the credits is the effect of a card with letters cut out and a torch shone through to give a stencil effect. I didn't like this idea as much as the other because i thought that it seemed more like a Horror rather than a Thriller.
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